Layout 16/25- Very pink and girlie! There's a lot going on. And since there so many links and onformation, you should definitely try to make some more pages. An extras page would be nice. And then you can put other links inside that page, like your reviews and quizzes. You need to make a reads page too.Not only do you need that, but you also need a contact page. It's nice having all those links to AIM and ICQ, but when it comes down to it, it looks much better not on the index page. Your awards should go on a seperate page as well unless they demand it to be on the index and in that case you should make it a text link. Needs a lot of organization~! Oh, and a smaller counter. Heh, and I don't know what you were thinking with that blue font! Ack, it's very distracting. And yay, book matches!

Content 18/25- Um, I started reading on July 4th. A couple entries later I found this one. I thought it was really cute. <3 You said that you were religious before, but wow, you really are. You have a lot of cool entries, mostly the ones for Pieces of You. Your writing style is okay. Wow, you are really religious. Haha.

Hehe~

Let's see. You basically write about your occasional problems, a lot of things about God, ect ect. But you lack emotion. It's not because emotion isn't there, it's because I don't think you know how to put it in a good sentence. You need detail to get your point across. You're straight and to the point. That can be good sometimes, but it's also nice to mix is up a bit. Use metaphors or similies, compare and contrast. Try using complex sentences, or changing your sentence structure. Simple things like that can make a difference. And I know this isn't English 101, but I know for a fact that you have something going on in your entries, now you just have to let it shine.

Commitment 1/5- Hardly everyday. Needs some work, like a lot.

Overall Aesthetics/Impressions 6/10- Not my favorite, but whatever you like.

Link 5/5- Yup, found it.

Extras 10/10- Tons~ You know what you have.

Contact 5/5 - Again, tons. AIM, notes, book, mail, ICQ, MSN

Errors 5/5- None that I noticed

Did I like it enough to go back? 10/10 - I would definitely come back for a follow up.

Overall 76/100 I really didn't want to review your diary because you've become more than just a reviewie. But I knew I had to since theres only the two of us. I tried being completely honest, and I think overall, I was. If you ever need help, you know where to go.

Reviewed by yours truly,

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